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Forget the Times….

September 27, 2011 Leave a comment Go to comments

Forget the times we walked the trail,
The gentle grass, the leaves falling,
Peeping flower and its drowsy leaves,
The lazy owl, the moonlit stream,
Aah!, no road is long when I walked with thee.

Forget the times we played the wind,
The gentle spray, the rain pouring,
Gloomy willow and its flashy grain,
The sullen clouds, the roaring wind,
Aah! No Storm is strong, when I walked with thee.

Forget the times we played the time,
The gentle touch, the smile gleaming,
Walking dream and its silent smile,
The envious time, a losing race,
Aah! No hour is late, when I walked with thee.

Forget the times, you say…Forget the times we were one
The broken heart, soul shrinking
Unimpassioned grief and its melancholy soul
Looming mist, a life galore
Aah! No life is life, when I walk without thee.

A tardy promise…. I will be through,
Broken heart, a tragic wound,
Denies life, forbids death
As soon as eternity is through, I promise, I will be over you.

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  1. KP
    October 1, 2011 at 1:07 am

    That was lovely.. and sad too.. may be that is why I liked it more!

    • October 1, 2011 at 1:33 am

      bliss and dolor are two sides of the same coin…:0) glad u like it

  2. September 29, 2011 at 2:34 am

    It was kinda treat to go through your poem, quite touchy.

    • October 1, 2011 at 12:40 am

      thanks aakash

  3. September 28, 2011 at 6:00 pm

    wow ur really into it loved every line …thanks for dropping by ..keep visiting *smiles*

    • September 28, 2011 at 10:50 pm

      thanks…

  4. September 27, 2011 at 6:22 pm

    I like the poems which have such a strong ending, quite stark! Like your style.

    Cheers,
    Chintan

    • September 27, 2011 at 6:39 pm

      @ chintan : thank you

  5. September 27, 2011 at 4:49 pm

    The way you molded last line in each paragraph is so beautiful, lovely poem. The title, the content, the feel, all makes it an awesome experience to read…

    • September 27, 2011 at 5:32 pm

      @ saru singhal : feels great !!

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